In Class Writing 12/11

Ethos

1. I do believe that my citations and my quotations are used correctly only I was not sure if italicizing my sources was the correct move. I do state there credibility well enough but usually I introduced them first.
2. I do believe that all my sources a credible, I also think that many of them are non biased as well.
3. I think that my tone presents my side of the argument, but I also have a few hints in the paper with my background with the subject.
4. I believe the amount of research I did was well beyond what was necessary and I gained a lot of knowledge in the subject too. Also the data that I put in is something that shows how much research I did for this argument.
5. I think this appeals to a huge audience since the subject is on such a big and tragic issue currently. I also concede my argument in two instances to the opposition.
6. I believe I am extremely empathetic towards the community that this effects because it is the nation that I live in. I want to make sure that this community remains safe, so that is why I addressed the issue.
7. My solution is not only ethical but it is also simple if one strongly believes in making this change. It is simply spreading awareness to the issue and why it needs to be solved.
8. My essay is also appropriately written for MLA audiences which is one of the steps I needed to improve on.

Logos

1. I believe that all of my claims are backed up by at least one piece of evidence and it appeals to all audiences.
2. My solution is fairly simple and my claims are more based on stats.
3. I tried my best to avoid all fallacies and changed the ones that I could when it was necessary