Revision ICW 9/25

Thesis: Jebara tells his viewers that math is a need to know subject through the use of questioning the importance, factual data & statistics, and humorous personal story

Topic sentence 1: Mohammed questions the importance of this issue and why action needs to be taken.

Topic sentence 2: One thing that Jebara further explains is the statistics that helped prove his point.

Topic Sentence 3: Jebara relates to the audience by telling a humorous personal story.

Published by ajrodz1

Alan is a first year student at Pima Community College and is currently pursuing an Associates degree in science. He is considering transferring to Arizona State University(ASU) to major in Forensic Science and hopes to receive a bachelor's degree. After he finishes school he plans on going into a career in law enforcement where he can apply his skills of science. Even though there is a possibility of him going to ASU; he is a die hard fan of the University of Arizona (U of A). For now, he hopes his college career goes smoothly.

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